Apparently Sherwood Smith has worked on her setting since 1959, when she was eight years old. The hard work she’s put into her story world shows in Crown Duel, and you get the feeling it’s only a taste of this rich setting.
Crown Duel is one story in two parts, and was at one point published as two separate works. In this paperback, it has been printed as a single novel, Smith’s original intent. However, there are two distinct parts to this story, and each has a slightly different feel, though the voice and tone remain the same throughout.
In the first part, Meliara and her brother, Branaric go to war against King Galdran, who plans to break the Covenant that protects the colourwood forests the Hill Folk cherish (full of highly-prized woods of blue, red and gold), and protects the people of Remalna from the Hill Folk. Meliara and Branaric promised their late father that they would take arms against the greedy king, but their campaign is not a success, and due to her own impulsiveness, Meliara is taken captive by the enemy and is carried to the capital city of Remalna by Vidanric, the blonde-haired and narrow-eyed Marquis of Shevraeth.
The second part is the account of how Meliara learns to survive at court amongst nobles vying for position after the war. The court is a new world of intrigue and deception to Meliara, a countess raised in the mountains of Tlanth.
The second part succeeds better than the first, but even the first section is an enjoyable read. Meliara is a somewhat unpleasant character, frustrating on occasion when you witness her obvious errors of judgement, though she refuses to see them herself. There are some odd bits; Smith seems reluctant to describe battle scenes. Meliara is absent or knocked out during some of them, others are “told” more than shown. Key moments are explained to her by other characters after the fact. This weakens the overall plot of the first half, and everything seems to happen on such a small scale that it’s surprising later when they refer to the events as a “war”.
The best thing about the first half is Meliara’s pluck, and her escape across the countryside, through villages, and finally back into the hands of her enemy. She is a surprisingly resourceful and resilient heroine without being unrealistic, and is a joy to read even when you’re shaking your head at her inwardly, or occasionally, screaming at her mentally. You know the author intended her to have these flaws, and Meliara feels like a real person, with all her “prickles and stings”.
The second part is more successful, although I wish it had been heavier on intrigue; In a political story, I like a bit of cloak and dagger, and not knowing who is bad or good, or who merely appears to be bad or good. Only one character’s nature seemed truly uncertain until the end, and even his motives weren’t quite obscure enough for my liking. The intricacies of court life were well-developed, however, and the character interactions were fun. My favourite bit was Meliara’s correspondence with a secret admirer who becomes her mentor in court life. The fact that I guessed who it was from the beginning only made it more charming.
This is the first book I’ve read in a long time that I didn’t want to end, and that’s saying something. Fortunately, Smith added a cute short story at the conclusion of the book that was like the prize in a Cracker-Jack box: the novel was complete without it, but it was a nice surprise all the same. I have a feeling I’ll miss the characters from Crown Duel for awhile—especially the Marquis of Shevraeth—but fortunately I can return to Smith’s fascinating world in Inda and her other books.